The Wanderer - Part Seven (Final chapter)
PART ONE (click here)
PART TWO (click here)
PART THREE (click here)
PART FOUR (click here)
PART FIVE (click here)
PART SIX (click here)
PART SEVEN
The next morning the sounds that once filled the shrine were vacant. The whishing sounds of the straw broom were absent, even the sounds of the earth being tilled in the modest garden were dormant. There were no sounds beyond that of the birds save for the sandals of a Priestess as she walked through the temple courtyard. Lovingly bundled in the pack on her back the two crystals gleamed in the sunlight. She left behind the shrine, the modest garden, the collapsed well, and the entire temple. Walking the forest path the purple flowers lilted down from the trees adorning her head. While hiking the path the Priestess stopped and gazed out into the woods, but she only saw trees. Her eyes, still crimson from the tears of the night before, drifted to the small patch of blue sky above her. She took a deep breath and steeled her self for the journey ahead.
There in the woods, beyond the trees where the Priestess had stopped, a man lay with a rusted sword, covered in purple flowers.
THE END
Exile
Original_exile@hotmail.com
PART TWO (click here)
PART THREE (click here)
PART FOUR (click here)
PART FIVE (click here)
PART SIX (click here)
PART SEVEN
The next morning the sounds that once filled the shrine were vacant. The whishing sounds of the straw broom were absent, even the sounds of the earth being tilled in the modest garden were dormant. There were no sounds beyond that of the birds save for the sandals of a Priestess as she walked through the temple courtyard. Lovingly bundled in the pack on her back the two crystals gleamed in the sunlight. She left behind the shrine, the modest garden, the collapsed well, and the entire temple. Walking the forest path the purple flowers lilted down from the trees adorning her head. While hiking the path the Priestess stopped and gazed out into the woods, but she only saw trees. Her eyes, still crimson from the tears of the night before, drifted to the small patch of blue sky above her. She took a deep breath and steeled her self for the journey ahead.
There in the woods, beyond the trees where the Priestess had stopped, a man lay with a rusted sword, covered in purple flowers.
THE END
Exile
Original_exile@hotmail.com
11 Comments:
tears fill my eyes.
By Anonymous, at Wednesday, April 12, 2006 6:52:00 AM
awww, you're so sweet,
i think the story only gives it's full effect when it's not broken up
By exile, at Wednesday, April 12, 2006 11:21:00 PM
yes indeed...but i have the full story....and it's amazing! ty!
:)
By Anonymous, at Thursday, April 13, 2006 7:36:00 AM
mitzee- i gues you and i are the only one who were still interested in this story
By exile, at Saturday, April 15, 2006 2:25:00 PM
NOOOOOOOO!!!! he cannot DIE!!!!!!
WAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHH....
make him wake up he must he must.
those were purple flowers. purple is magical. you must wake him up. there is a magic potion in the deep of the forest. the priestess must go get it!!!
By mistipurple, at Monday, April 17, 2006 2:13:00 AM
I'm so glad I waited to read it until I had the whole thing. Exile, it was pure brilliance!!
So, where's the next one?
By Ghetto Photo Girl, at Monday, April 17, 2006 4:23:00 PM
misti- "every man dies, but not every man truely lives." besides, if you think of what his past could have been, all the things he had with him, it would take this grand of an act of redemption.
exo- i figured most people were doing that, but then again...
By exile, at Wednesday, April 19, 2006 2:49:00 PM
*sniff. it was a noble death. and i am still heart wrecked. i guess the princess has him in her heart and she can go on, and he was fully redeemed and is at peace.
you can see i hate endings.
By mistipurple, at Wednesday, April 19, 2006 7:52:00 PM
misti- sometimes all you can do is leave someone a perfect memory of love
his sacrifice was his redemtion
By exile, at Wednesday, April 19, 2006 10:05:00 PM
I love that he dies. He was supposed to die. That was a great story.
By Mackenzie, at Wednesday, July 12, 2006 8:34:00 AM
bv- thanks, i've always felt that there's 2 kinds of endings to a story, the happy ending, and then the ending the story needs.
By exile, at Wednesday, July 12, 2006 8:48:00 AM
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